viernes, 8 de septiembre de 2017

Alien

The alien is called Wookie. His measure is of 2,60 as tall as the roof of my house. He can convert in a human when he touch one. He is blue like the sky. He comes from Naboo, a very far away planet that is at border of destruction.
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  1. Tuti Brito Evans21 de septiembre de 2017, 4:41 p.m.

    Marco,
    I would love to see Wookie. Publish the picture please!
    I like your similes. However, there are some grammar issues:
    -"His measure is of 2.60 as tall as the roof" --> He is 2.60 m high. He/That is as tall as...
    - convert --> turn into
    -he touch --> he touches
    -at border of destruction --> about to be destroyed/to disappear

    I would also like to know why his planet is about to disappear and why he turns into a human when he touches one. Is he planning to invade Earth?
    Mark: 7, 50 (at least until you post picture)

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